The Arwen, Season 7: Battlesphere

interesting story but inconsistant

(4 stars)

Alan Mighty

This seriesis inconsistent, different groups will do things and then it willbe stated later that they can't do that. the author changes their abilities as it becomes convient for the story. Example: when we first encounter the handlers, it is established that they are blind but later it mentions one looking a human in the eye. Also Captain Cook is a hypocrite, she gets mad at people for doing things that she does herself. Example: she resents the Arwen for disobeying her orders, then she disobeys orders from own superior.

needs a good editor

(4 stars)

Suzie

The author does a great job reading. However, this series made me realize the true benefits of having an editor. The story is intriguing, but the the inconsistencies, lapses and poor grammar detract considerably from the tale. The author needs to review the uses of subject and object pronouns. I found myself shouting the correct pronoun every time he got it wrong, so I shouted a lot!

the series is decent and imaginative .

(3 stars)

JP

While I enjoyed the series there is a number of distracting and off-putting components to it. The vocabulary is limited, often being inaccurate and/or inadequate. While read, a few times the reader confuses names or pronouns making it hard to understand whats going on. Population scale is for all involved irregular and small which among other mistakes portends lack of research on the writers part. I did enjoy the arc of the story and it's imaginative nature but it was hampered by the above and decreased my enjoyment of it. Thank you for writing it!

such a great series such a sad thing to end

(5 stars)

herman l . Middle Tn

a really great book series H1 Builds on top of the other but also stands independently as its Own Story. well written, well-read and it strange that sounds I will miss some of the characters in the story and hope to see them come up somewhere else thank you for working so hard and doing such a great job

Not good.

(1 stars)

WRAnderson

I was supremely disappointed in the story. Weak character development, rushing through important or story-making scenes, no military in existence is made up if all people as timid as he made them. Its obvious the writer wishes he was the professor, very few people would put up with his attitude. I couldnt see myself ever buying this.

A must listen to!

(5 stars)

50 Plus Guy

After to the complete series 1 thru 7, I will admit I wasn't sure at first but The Arwen just got better and better the interactions of the characters, the story line and is nice to see that the humans weren't always the smartest race. Timothy great writing and your narrative was excellent.

Awesome

(5 stars)

A LibriVox Listener

I listened to the entire series. It was very entertaining and I'm sorry to be at the end of the series. well written, well read, with a lot left for the imagination to fill in. I really enjoyed the series a lot and I hope Mr. Callahan return to writing more someday

(0 stars)

By: Pirvonen

Like Mike, I was impressed by how deft you are in conveying dramatic visuals. What's more important is that your characters are living and breathing persons, not just cookie-cutter (or throw-of-dice) props. You show compassion and interest in even many of the side characters. In some well-known modern space epics ...